The red circle is just a note to avoid confusion - the line is the roof line not separating that area of space.
Above is the roof detail - is this sufficent for 1:50?
In the above picture, just wondering if the 'ramp' part of the section was correct - have put people in there to make it clearer. Should there be a thickness to the ramp? Or just a single line to show the slope - should this be a light grey as I'm not cutting into it? Have put a timber floor between floors - see the detail in section.
The blue lines are a lighter 'grey' for the activties in the background etc
Section A is above - hope you can see these images larger - is there enough detail?
The larger space on the right is the entrance area, which then leads to the ramp which takes the person up to the raised level (seen on plan)
Section B is above - does the reception area look correct (red circle)? Wasn't able to find a person sitting but will definitly look into this...
Just wanting to check there is enough detail with the activties and people before I start to use illustrator. Is there also enough details in the footings/roof structure and wall structures (inc. glass frame)?
Thanks
Am currently doing a sketch up model to start tracing for the perspective sketches - just for more imagery. As these sections are the most important, can you make sure there is anything else to do to make sure I PASS.
Anymore things to think about?
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